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__Friday June 24__

REFLECTION: I change my opening paragraph

The story is written by Percy

I woke up to a tapping at the window there sitting on the window was a flaming red cat, with two deep sleepy blue eyes I opened the window it leaped onto my bed then I turned to close the window and sat on the end of the bed were the unusual looking cat was there in it’s place was a twelve year old boy with deep black bags under his eyes he wore orange clothes, “Took your time didn’t you Percy” he roared at me “I waited all night for you jack but you didn’t show and I fell asleep” I mumble back “Were did you go last night jack? I asked “Out to my mates and then we went to go and trash countdown but the cops were there I think because of last week, so we went to the video shop and hired out Fast And Furious the new one he clammily said to me Then he jumped into my bed went to sleep.

__Thursday 23 june__

The story is written by percy

I woke with a bird tapping at the window I had a fun felling that the bird wasn’t real but there it was I jumped out of my bed and open it my window and looked the other way looking at my brother changing gave me a headache.Last night my brother Jack went to a party with his friends and said to before he left “look out for me in the morning bro” and then he was gone.

__Wednesday 11 May__

Once a upon a time there was a little orange bunny rabbit called fluffy he had a little problem when he was angry he would turn to something different. Fluffy lived under a tree that tree was the biggest in the silver wood he liked to watch all the butterflies with colors of orange, blue and pink fly around the flowers. On that day on the other side of silver wood there was a furious eagle known as evil E and his followers they despise the rabbit for protecting the butterflies they were plotting to destroy the field of blossoms were the butterflies gather food. The next day when fluffy woke up he went to window and saw evil E and his followers racing thought the jungle pulling a crate of explosive to his disbelief they were heading for blossoms that made him so angry that he took one of his short cut tunnel that lead to the far end of the forest and then he start to put his plan to action he made a bow with bits of string and a branch for arrows he put marshmallows on forks then he made a a whole and covered it with leaves then he waited in a ditch he had formed. “Keep walking to you see those horrible flowers” said evil E then out of thin air the was a flash of sliver and red then in the tree next him was a fork with a bright blue flame on the end “HOLD YOUR PLACES!” scream evil E then he saw it was a orange arm around a tree got you he thought he flew silently to the tree the jabbed a big claw in to the orange arm then a scream and all of his men had

__Friday 7th May__

Once a upon a time there was a little orange bunny rabbit called fluffy he had a little problem when he was angry he would turn to something different. Fluffy lived under a tree that tree was the biggest in the silver wood he liked to watch all the butterflies with colors of orange, blue and pink fly around the flowers. On that day on the other side of silver wood there was a furious eagle known as evil E and his followers they despise the rabbit for protecting the butterflies they were plotting to destroy the field of blossoms were the butterflies gather food.

__Tuesday 10__ __th__ __May 2011__

Once a upon a time there was a little orange bunny rabbit called fluffy he lived under a tree that tree was the biggest in the jungle of butterflies he liked to watch all the butterflies with colors of orange, blue and pink. On that day on the other side of jungle of butterflies there was an angry fox plotting to get the biggest tree in the jungle he was going to trap all the butterflies